Continue to refine the lens this week. The video can be seen changing some details based on George’s suggestions and making some adjustments to some of the shots.
This week’s video has the following footage that could be further adjusted:
- 1.Last week I added a shot of a girl walking into a cave, and this week I’m going to flesh out the details of that shot. Firstly to bring the shot in closer and highlight the character more. Then there are changes to the movement, with the girl first holding one hand on the wall and her body leaning forward like a still to look ahead. Then she walks forward again, stopping when she reaches the centre of the shot and looking to the left and right.
- 2.The close-up of the girl looking left and right was deleted because the girl was already doing so in the added shot of the walking cave.
- 3.Make the shot of the protagonist seeing the building inside the cave last an extra second. And add an action. The protagonist is struck by the scene and then discovers that the lantern she is looking for is on the ground not far away. To segue into the next shot of the protagonist picking up the lantern, add an action at the end of this shot of the protagonist running out of shot to the right to pick up the lantern.